Feedback On First Mock Up Magazine (Research Into Potential Target Audience)

After creating this magazine I presented it to my peers. They Liked the magazine and said "It fitted with The Little White Lies Theme" - (Louis)

They really liked the Color Aberration tool I used on the photograph of the girl. 

The use of black as the background establishes the horror genre.

However the improvements I should make are as follows:

There is no film title/cover line on the magazine so the audience do not know what the film is called.

Make the girl on the front slightly bigger

Used the proper Little White Lies Masthead so it is not blurry when you expand it. 

I am going to take all these comments on board and use them to improve my final draft.